Whaat's Sprites

[LutiChris]

I like the one gold hair...it matches his jacket
also i have something against grey/white hair on young adolescents except for Near :P
pose looks nice, shading on pants is nice & sleek. try adding more contrast to his skin especially around his face but avoid having it @ a high saturation
and one more thing...add his crotch in

[Whaat]

Thanks for comment Luti D: i tried fixing the things you mentioned:
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The changes aren't very visible D: i tried to make his face's light more white and i added crotch D:
Better?

[Whaat]

Okay, tried to make the same guy with some updates to original LF2 style:

[Sonic Boom]

where are his feet or shoes?

[Whaat]

He has so long pants that they aren't visible.

[XLittlebob252]

i prefer the non lf2 style better
its less fat and its your original style

[Whaat]

But if i make a char of him, then i want it to be LF2 styled :/ so i also made the LF2 proportioned, the shading is still ''my style''.

[Whaat]

Long time no sprite.
So here's a sprite D:

His right leg is kinda messed (also both of his legs are maybe too thin?), but otherwise, how do you like it D: ? Is shading good/bad? How could it be improved? Is smthing else weird?

[XLittlebob252]

okay this is something i should say
proportions are aweful you got to work on that try learning it from a lf2 sprite or someone who is a great spriter from the forum
the upper body is too big and his arms are too close to his body.
legs are okay
his head is weird its barley shaded and the eyes dont fit and he has no nose and no mouth
shading speaking its okay

[Monolith]

Long time no sprite.
So here's a sprite D:

His right leg is kinda messed (also both of his legs are maybe too thin?), but otherwise, how do you like it D: ? Is shading good/bad? How could it be improved? Is smthing else weird?

proportions are bad,when making shading on the body make same with hair,eyes,eyes are psycho,again,,i thought u are thrying to improve,not to ruin it.
~Monolith