Whaat's Sprites

[Monolith]

Chest and stomach muscles need same shading like arms

Thanks, gosh, finally a useful post from you.

i noticed you use the same hair everytime how about change it a bit?

''Everytime'' = 3 times, i'm trying to use the same hairstyle until i make a good sprite with it D:

and make less simple clothes?

Ok, i will try the next time :/
Tried to fix the shading:

need more shading on stomach,now he looks like he have 3 light sheets of metal and one darker

@Whaat,instead of trying to say something against me,better try concretate on ur sprites shading,once i thinked u are cool spriter,but now i changed my mind

[Whaat]

need more shading on stomach,now he looks like he have 3 light sheets of metal and one darker

Well, yeah, maybe you're right.

instead of trying to say something against me,better try concretate on ur sprites shading,once i thinked u are cool spriter,but now i changed my mind

Maybe becouse you have already surpassed me in spriting D: ?

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I tried to sum all tips. LF2 styled, better shading, more details, etc.
So i made this D:
Base : : detailed one

[XLittlebob252]

shading is nice
face looks like s**t
first of all face is squashed
iris are way to small
and he has no facial feturs like a nose or a mouth

[Whaat]

face looks like s**t
first of all face is squashed
iris are way to small
and he has no facial feturs like a nose or a mouth

Face is squashed, how to fix it? Add more shading layers to face?
He has nose and mouth but seems like they aren't very visible :/
Fixed eyes, nose and mouth:
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[Silverthorn]

Eyes are a bit better, BUT:
- mouth is still barely visible
- no separation between chin and chest (as in: no neck and no contrast between the aforementioned)
- hair-shape implies a skull which is awkwardly leaned backwards (just let the hair stretch a bit more to the right to fix that)
- eyes.... (yes, still :P) Their alignment gives the char somewhat an o_O expression where one eye is a tad lower than the other.

[Whaat]

Thanks for good comment BP D:
One more try:
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Now it looks better, doesn't it :o ?
E: Made a new base, i hope i don't ruin it with the face D:

[Whaat]

Head looks too large comparing to other parts of body.

Oh, i forgot to tell that it's how i make the heads :/ i leave them little larger than they should be, sprite them, and then resize, that way i can draw eyes and other stuff i need training with better D:

+ Unnatural (looking) position of arms.

I don't think so D: atleast it is ''realistic'', i could do that D:

And hell waaay too small feet.

Well, that may just look so since you are preferring to the too big head, but if they still look too small after i have resized the head, i will make them bigger.
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Tried making the face and somekinda effect/glowing:

[prince_freeza]

one this id complain about your sprites is that you always make their eyes like this:



better practice on that, the eyes you make now look static.

[Whaat]

Put that in spoiler please. It's burning my eyes.

When you see it, you'll sh*t bricks xp
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PF: But how D: shading to the eyes or what? Can you edit one of my sprites and show how you would make it D: ?

[bashscrazy]

Put that in spoiler please. It's burning my eyes.

When you see it, you'll sh*t bricks xp
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PF: But how D: shading to the eyes or what? Can you edit one of my sprites and show how you would make it D: ?

Didn't I already do it?

I tried fixing the eyes for you.
Here: