My story contest

[symaroth1]

@TLGM im just saying i read his story its kinda weird

lol it covers the crazy bit indeed

[ossiee]

once upon a time, in a island in africa there was two little kids one named Tokolo and the other one was named Nichaso.
they were best friends, they lived in two other clans but they sneaked out to hang out together.
a couple years later the two of theme got very big, and one day someone of Tokolo's clan got into a fight with another one from Nichaso's clan and that created a big war between the two clans and so Tokolo and Nichaso were big and has to join the war.
after 10 days of fighting and killing Nichaso's clan was about to destroy Tokolo's clan, and Tokolo was faced by Nichaso and they two had to fight each other, Tokolo didnt want to fight him and Nichaso neither but he has to, and Nichaso hit him to the ground but couldnt kill him so he talled Tokolo to run, and thats how he did.
after monthes of going Tokolo finelly got to a place were was live, and he saw amazing thing like cars, big houses, and started to fuse in the company, but when he realy was amazed when he saw the light Invention, the amazing beautiful Lightbulb, and he stayed there.
a years later he learn about where he is, the language, the people he learnd about AMERICA!, but he wasnt realy happy he missed his very old friend Nichaso, and traveled to africa to look after him, he was searching monthes untill he saw a leader of a very big clan and asked for his name and he sayd:"My name is the great Nichaso" in a pride, and Tokolo asked him to come for a talk.
he talled Nichaso who he is, and Nichaso surprised and was realy excited about it, but when Tokolo asked him: "why did you hit me in the war?, why?! we were best friends! tell me why?!" and Nichaso has no expression, and no answer for that.
then Nichaso talled him to come to a little trip, just the two of theme and talled how he is sorry and didnt want to kill him and Tokolo accepted the excuse, and they got back to be friends again.
when they were about to get back to the clan a big lion saw theme and once they saw him too the lion started to chase them, and they couldnt run away so Nichaso talled Tokolo to run away and get back to a safe place, and Nichaso got an african sword and started to fight the lion.
the lion got Nichaso to the ground and Tokolo was about to help him but Nichaso talled him to go away that he doesnt want him as a friend anymore, but that was to make him run from the lion and save his life.
and every year in the same day Tokolo makes a memorial Day for Nichaso who saved his life

THE END

[Bla bla bla 44]

I'm in (first time to write a story ). So, here we go

In a village called Mabina two brothers were born Hachigo and Foron. One with an ability of electricity and the other one was extremely smart. When they grew up they've found out that they were special. The smart brother Foron invented a lightbulb with a special ability to turn everything into ash but did not know how to start it. Hachigo knowing on his electric powers turned on the bulb. They got out and pointed to the window and a weird black cloud got out of the bulb. It went right into a chicken that was running from a man. The chicken turned into ashes and the man had a weird expression. He looked at the brothers and started to chase them. They were running and then they stopped because the cloud from the lightbulb turned into a cloud monster. They were all scared as the monster started roaring. Foron immediately thinked of a plan and told his brother Hachigo. The plan was Hachigo to bother the monster while Foron restarted the bulb and get the monster in it and destroyed. That's what they did. While Hachigo was bothering the monster Foron immediately restarted the bulb and the monster got in it. Then he broke the bulb and it was destroyed. Foron then sweared that he never will make another unsafe invention again. THE END.

Hope you liked it.

[ossiee]

good job Bla bla, this is interesting story! also crazy
i tried to read my story and gut realy boerd

[Bla bla bla 44]

Thanks ossiee . I think your story is interesting in a way. Also it's pretty sad. Can't wait everyone to write their stories.

[LutiChris]

ok? Lutichris?
weird???

haha thats totally what i expected
im like "ok, story contest......ima just gonna bullsh*t this and see far i can get it"

[Bla bla bla 44]

Erm... So the guy are you continuing this contest or what?

[Reaper]

@up:

The deadline 26 february (will be Extended if needed)

Some people might rely on having that time. In fact, I think I'll come up with something once my next exam is done.

[Gad]

Crime... Sadness... Agony... We all know them well. But we know them as borders that separate us from death. Sometimes death doesn't mean the end. You'll say that we don't really know what happens after you die. Nobody knows this and nobody will know until he dies.
But there is also another result of dying, it does exist in some cases. The main condition is that you are a reaper.

She was lying down on a carpet soaked with blood and crimson stains were adorning her pale skin. Glass crushed to the dust was sticking out of her eyes making her look like a broken lightbulb. But she wasn’t dead, not yet. The only thing that was keeping her alive was pain. It was causing stretching of each part of her body. She never looked so beatiful before. At least for him, even through these eyes flooded in sadness.
- I’m not the first one. How many people have you killed? – Weak choking voice went out of leaky mouth.
- Now you’re talking? This is a little too late. - He lasted expressionless.
- Answer me.
- Why should I? I still didn’t get an answer to my question.
- And you will never get it. The chase has already started.
- Chase? Such a ridiculous world.
He skewed over her that close, that she could feel his cold breath on her boiling with pain neck.
- Do you have a dream? – He asked.
- I expect you to die.
Then he mixed the taste of steel with her heart, finally. If her eyes weren’t senseless, the last thing she would see was his smile. Demonlike smile fed by sadness was going through his face.
- Too late... I’m already dead.

[Hero destroyer]

@Luti,
Crazy dude? Stupid Duck? I LIKE IT!!
@Gad,
*speechless* +
I'm quite busy so I haven't read others, sorry. Edit this later and will be posting one soon.