[Char] Nino

[Memento]

is this better as breathing? I'm not sure ._.

One arm is way higher than the other one and his left hand and upper arm look tiny and I think it's moving a little bit too much. That might be what is causing it to look a bit strange

[Jahvansi]

better?

[Memento]

better?

Way better!  

[Jahvansi]

Sorry for the lack of updates, I had a looooong busy week end ful of real life fun

w/e here's a kick attack, I'm not sure what it will be used for yet, either D^A or sth else :P

[Ariel]

back in town so first thing the face pic
i made 2 background versions
normal one and glowing one
.....

[Memento]

back in town so first thing the face pic
i made 2 background versions
normal one and glowing one.....

Welcome back Ariel! I like the green background best.
It's cool! The only thing I'd change are the eyes, a bit more neutral would be better I think

edit: another thing I noticed is that the shoulders aren't symetrical. I think the problem is that there is quite some diffirence between the two sides of the upper trapezius muscle:

[Ariel]

back in town so first thing the face pic
i made 2 background versions
normal one and glowing one.....

Welcome back Ariel! I like the green background best.
It's cool! The only thing I'd change are the eyes, a bit more neutral would be better I think

edit: another thing I noticed is that the shoulders aren't symetrical. I think the problem is that there is quite some diffirence between the two sides of the upper trapezius muscle:

could u explain urself?
i dont see any problem with the shoulder
the pose u look at him is not front
it slide bit to the side

here ya go-

[Memento]

It is as if the muscle I described is a tad bigger on one side than on the other side. Could be very easily fixed with smudge tool or something. I don't have time for it now though, but I'll get back at it soon if you want

[Ariel]

i still cant place my finger on what u say
guess when u will show it ill understand

[Memento]

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Man, I didn't notice the lines you painted in the bigger picture >< The only diffirence in my edit is that I made the insertion of his trapezis muscle a tiny little bit further towards his shoulder and I fixed something minor on the other side (barely worth the edit). And as a bonus, I screwed up the shading like I always do My edit is in no way better looking than the original, especially since I made the muscle too bulky I still hope you get the idea...
You can either edit your own sprite to get the muscle to attach a few pixels further toward the shoulder or keep it like this. It's no big deal anyway I think.