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My newest chara, I´m sure I finish this one

Jeffry, kind of magician
[Image: Jeffry.jpg]

Guess the base :O.

Improvments or Comments would be nice
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Now I take a wild guess and say, that the base was... Knight!

Well, he's better than your previous chars, the eyes and the hood are not that good.
You maybe should use a already sprited face, and add a third Dimensound to the hood. He looks kinda flat right now.
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Lauli Wrote:Now I take a wild guess and say, that the base was... Knight!

false XD

Lauli Wrote:Well, he's better than your previous chars, the eyes and the hood are not that good.
You maybe should use a already sprited face, and add a third Dimensound to the hood. He looks kinda flat right now.

I agree. First I took John´s eyes, but It would be just c & p, I try to overwork them. To the hood, do you mean adding shade? If not pls explane a bit more. thx
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It's not bad if you use c + p. Especially not in the eyes. I've tried already several times to sprite a char from scratch. The LF2 proportions were actually really good, the face wasn't. If you don't want to use c + p, you could let the hood cover his eyes.

And for the hood:
ImagesHack Wrote:[Image: hoodmz0.png] [Image: hood1ov7.png]
Guess the difference

The first one is how it should be supposed to look like, the second one is how it looks right now.

Plus I noticed he stands very humpy. You maybe should give him a shoulder and a bit of a neck.
[Image: jeffry2fw6.png]

BTW: You should use PNG format. It's small without any quality loss.
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I agree with lauli, but he's a bit fat, and his robe is totally plain. It looks kinda boring, so I suggest that you add something to the robe, like a tabard with a symbol on or something

btw what do you mean with c & p?

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Cut & Paste (reference: My mod :D)
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Lauli Wrote:[...]

ok thx

better that way?
[Image: Jeffry-2.jpg]

€dit:
To the thingy, that he´s fat, I know but it has to be so, I already made him thiner, btw the base was sorcerer, and he must be VERY fat when you say it like this.^_^
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dunno.. maybe it looks fatterin your char then sorcerer by some reason

but it looks better with a necklace :D

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Ya, an amulet could fit in quite well in there. But you maybe should use a golden and not so pixelated one. Look at John.
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Well, imo a magician has to be fat, if he got a robe :D
To the amuelett, Gold rly fits better here =D
€dit: [Image: Jeffry-3.png]
€dit2: [Image: Jeffry-4.png]
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