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Just a quick suggestion. Since you show the top portion of the aura that is flowing at the bottom, you could add a bit of a curvature to the bottom of the hour glass and also show some of the top portion of the candle too. If looking from above is what you aim for, that is..
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Personaly, I don't like it. It shouts too much Empire tho it should be Little Fighter because we all are here thanks to it. Would use blue instead of violet/purple. Maybe use of brighter colors to give warm feeling.
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(09-24-2016, 05:35 PM)Ariel Wrote: ![[Image: OLtiZBG.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/OLtiZBG.jpg)
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Looks like a crankin RPG title. Great design but doesnt really fit well with the overall theme of this site.
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Technically it is really good. Id remake the the upper subtitle, its barely visable and font is not really fitting there. Also this violet effect instead of an 'i' is too fluid. It doesnt Look like a letter at all.
Beside technical aspect, whole concept is really cheezy and completly improper. When it comes to logotypes there is much to learn about. Its all about feelings, emotions, coupling and other alike. Id say yours is too magical and misty, it definitely lacks the 'little fighter' element. I really like the empire title, but id simply change this smoke to a regular letter. +that E letter on right seems to be unnecesarly jumping out with higher position. I know its done like that to keep with the left one, but still it feels wrong for me.
Ofc these are my overshared feelings so please note that some of them are just very mine. Somebody else could find it more balanced.