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The Secrets of the shadow Battles.
#1
Yeah chapter one and the intruduction.
They're not huge chapters but i'll try to make them longer.

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The big black clouds hung like a big sword over kenzo’s house.
It was night and it was raining cats and dogs, so everybody was glad to be at home.
But suddenly the door of the house, near the edge, opened and a men came out.
The men was walking down to the city.
He was wearing a big black coat, that protects him from the rain.
“what a weather,” the men said walking a bit faster.
He arrived at a bar, in the middle of the city.
He heard the soldiers recruting persons, which where dumb enough to fight against the dark alliance.
Everybody knews that the alliance was about to win the war, but some people believe that they could change it.
But kenzo wasn’t so dumb to believe that his life would be better if he would be a solider.
“Hey you, over there!” shouted a soldier from where the barkeeper was.
Kenzo didn’t realized him.
“Hey you, I mean the one with the glasses and the gloves… and the big black coat” the soldier said again.
“What do you want from me?” said kenzo walking to him.
“You’re not looking strong but I think you could have some nice abilitys”, the soldier said, trying to recrut kenzo for the army.
“Yeah I have some nice abilitys, go out of this bar and I’ll show you”, kenzo said walking trough the door.
The soldier followed him.
Kenzo made a trashing hand move and a little lance made of glass, drilled into the men’s neck.
“That are my nice abilitys”, kenzo said walking into the bar again.
“Same as usual” kenzo said to the barkeeper.
The barkeeper sighs and brought kenzo the drink.
“Kenzo you can’t kill all the soldiers”, the barkeeper critismed kenzo.
“Why not? I’ve just showed him my “abilitys””; kenzo answered.
“Did you noticed that they’re set a bounty at you”, the barkeeper whispered.
“What the hell!?”, kenzo shouted trough the room.
Four soldiers came into the room with swords.
“Who is kenzo?”, the man with the double sword asked.
“Whe have the order to bring him to bring him to the king”.
“That’s kenzo”, the barkeeper said, threwing him from his chair.




“What the hell is going on?” kenzo shouted looking at the swords of the soldiers.
“We have to take you to the king”, the soldier replied immediately.
“But why? Why does he wants to see somebody like me?”, kenzo said.
“You’ll see”, the soldier said grabbing his arms and bringing him out of the bar.

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It was a long and hard walk, and kenzo was angry cause the soldiers had horses too ride and he was walking in front.
“We’ll make a break over here”, the soldier said and kenzo was glad to hear this.
“The only good thing, you’ve said after we were in the bar,” kenzo spotted.
“What have you said?”
“You know it”
“Don’t bring him food or something else.”

Kenzo had to pay the prize for his spot. While the soldiers were sleeping in a tent, he was sleeping outside.
The rain hasn’t stopped so kenzo was lying in the mud.
“You damnit bastards”, kenzo shouted trough their break place.
Nobody was saying one word.
A soldier, wearing a bandana, came to him.
“What have you said?”
“You’re in advise, you know my name”
“My name is guigs, the first soldier of this operation”
“I’m an operation? Why does the king want’s me to see so badly?”
“I can’t answer you.”
After guigs has gone, kenzo decided to sleep.
“Who or what the hell is guigs? He has a devilish aura,” Kenzo thought.

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In the morning the rain has stopped, and the soldiers were waking him up with a big bottle of water over his head.
“Who? What? Where?”, kenzo said totally confused.
“Stand up, we have to leave.”
Kenzo decided not to call him bastard cause he was really hungry.



They walked trough a forest and kenzo was playing around with his glas.
He was shooting some birds with his glass lances.
“Hey you, Kenzo”, a soldier suddenly said.
“What’s going on?”
“Hunt your own meal”
“Yeah I’ll do”, kenzo said looking at a big hawk, directly above them.
Kenzo shoots a big lance to the air, and the hawk fell dead into his arms.
“So what’s your meal, soldier?”, kenzo asked.
“It’s a rabbit”, the soldier replied.
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#2
Nice Intro. Are you using this story for any mod?
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Nope i wont use this for any mod
it's just for the fun.
Why?
do you want to use it?
:D
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#4
I like it, seems to be direct.

Waiting for other caps.
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#5
first of all cool idea and good intro.
how long did it take you to make this?
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#6
ehr like 10 minutes why?
i've almost finished chapter 2
but i'm playing a bit around with the troop that gonna be send with me.
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#7
just wanted to know.
cool story waiting for more XD
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People, inscribe your characters on this history :D
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inscribe?
too lazy to look in a dictionary
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why dont you come online in msn guigs?
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--“The only good thing, you’ve said after we were in the bar,” kenzo spotted.--

To spot something is to notice something with the eyes (to see something) ;) I guess you meant 'taunt' or 'flout' or something in that meaning...

And why didn't he just run away in the night? Well you didn't mention that he was kinda tied up or something... :P
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