JoHo15´s Art

[A-Man]

What a traditional animation style. It looks very lively. I love it!

[JoHo15]

At Work (Click to View)

Request: Cynthia (Click to View)

Request: Misty (Click to View)

Request: Olivia Snoozberry (Click to View)

[JoHo15]

Tried to work more on composition and background

Imagine another world (Click to View)

[Silverthorn]

Interesting piece! If you don't mind, I do have a bit of crit in the technical aspects, though.

Perspective (Click to View)

Based on the bed, I drew in the perspective grid to help visualize what needs some extra-treatment. Essentially, the way it is right now implies that the VP is extremely far up. This entails a view from very far up downwards. This conflicts with the design of the girl who is depicted more or less from the front. Also, the shelf on the right doesn't quite follow the perspective lines either. Using rectangular shapes is one of the easiest ways to establish a clearly defined perspective. If those don't properly align, though, the perspective quickly falls flat.

The sheets she's throwing up are a nice addition but lack a bit of contrast: they blend in with the background quite easily. You might want to try out tinkering with adding local lights to help counteracting this.

Apart from that, again, nice idea. Keep it up!

[JoHo15]

Rinkah (Click to View)

Fanart from Fire Emblem Fates

[LutiChris]

I really like the colors and shading you did there but I'm not totally ecstatic on the pose. It could be a bit more dynamic with her legs bent and ready to fight it kinda looks awkward and she is barely holding onto the weapon with her fingers lightly supporting it doesn't make me believe she is ready to fight but just there posing for the camera. i probably wouldn't care if the face was all happy and bubbly but she looks super serious so i think it would make sense to have that mimicked in the rest of the body by giving her that dynamic pose as well as thoroughly grabbing onto her weapon by the palm of her hand instead of just lightly grazing it against her fingers. on top of that you gave her abs which tells me she is serious about working out and trying to look strong the pose doesn't match the rest of the vibe. either make it so that she doesn't look serious/fit or she looks serious and tough, i'd go for that latter option. fix that and you're golden mate

[JoHo15]

@LutiChris
I actually dont want to change my finished pieces so i can see the mistakes i made when years passed.

Face Study (Click to View)

First time tried to study form a real photo. I didn't wanted to get the exact replica. Focused more about the shading.
I used a photo from Avril Lavigne for reference.

[JoHo15]

I don't draw that much i did last year about 7 drawings (3 digital)
and i wasn't really intrested in doing studys and i foucused more about colors last year :/
But i wanted to change that and draw more this year

Reference (Click to View)

[JoHo15]

Drawing (Click to View)

Reference (Click to View)

[JoHo15]

unknown Beach (Click to View)

Tried to work on composition, background and some new shading style.