((PREVIEW)) [char] Razor

[Hypermodder]

Razor is a char I'm making for FutureLF2.
I'm already workin' on the 2nd spritesheet, but it's damn hard.
Here is the first spritesheet-- hope you like it!

[Bamboori]

wow, cool
I would change a few details,like the blurred kicking-frames
or the pixels above the heavy-weapon-frames.
in frames 14,15,40-45,62,63 the head sits very strange on the body.
but all in all, a nice spritesheet^^

[~Dome~]

It´s bad imo
The sprites are just cp and bad recolering...
The jumping frames look wierd, and the defend frame looks like he broke his leg XD

[Silverthorn]

Hmm, the shading is... erm... how shall I say... not good... the shirt just consists out of 3 colors which seem to be just smashed together...
btw, check the rolling-pics, Firzen's head is just cut off...
Also, in a couple of other places the head doesn't blend over to the body. Sometimes it looks like his neck is broken.


btw, by now I'm also for Cirno's suggestion. For your future skins, you should put everything in one thread that you call something like "Hypermodder's skin archive". Seriously, you're spamming the Projects-forum with all your "characters"

[Lauli]

Well, still considering that you haven't been spriting for a long time:

It's not very good.

-It looks like JPEG Quality, even though it's PNG. It looks not very clean.
-The head is only cut out in a rectangle (jumping frames, standing & walking frames for instance)
-The shading should be exactly the other way. The darker colours should be there where the brighter ones are in this case.
-He doesn't look very futuristic. So probably he won't really fit into a "Future LF2".

[plankton]

i don't think firzen hair looks goodd on anybody

[snorsorbet]

dome, BP and lauli have got good points, all off them

@Lauli he can add some futuristic eye glasses or something to the face and a pair off metal boots instead off those bandit ones.

the head is the most disappointing thing here (cause it looks so cut off)

[Hypermodder]

Thank you all for your reviews!^^

Well, it was hard work to cut off and paste firzens head and first I had to greyen up bandit.
Firzen has a robe and bandit a cap, thats why pasting was very hard. finaly I colorized it red. XD
Now, if he don't looks futuristic, plz aswer me this question:

should I finish the skin or try a new one (without firzens head)???
plz review!

[Bamboori]

when I see all the bad reviews (all except mine), I would make a new sprite sheet. But you should try to make a totally new char, because copypasta is very difficult when it should look good. Try template or another char as base, make him a new body, head and hair and maybe make him a weapon.
And when you try to make a futuristic char, try to make him out of steel for example.