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Little Fighter: The Xenomorphs War
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Little Fighter: The Xenomorphs's War



Chapter One:


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Chapter three:


Chapter four:


Chapter five:


Chapter six:


Chapter seven:

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great story and spooky...
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#3
great story but the spelling in the 16th line of the story is wrong.

It should be retrieve not retreat.
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Usually, in these stories, you forget spelling and just go along with it.
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Nice beginning, but you'd better choose another name!

Name already used!
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yea, its a cool story....quite different from the original LF2 stage mode.....
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great story and it is very suspense and spooky!
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Thanks. And if somebody haven't noticed yet, all technology are from StarCraft. The character's abilities will also be explain as some kind of SC's technology (if I can think of it :D)
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The stoy is really good, but a little confusing at first.....Ch.1 and Ch.2 confused me a lil'.....
About Duke crying....it should be: with tears falling down his eyes. ^^''
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very good story i like it very much again very spooky and suspense.
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