New Sprite(s)-Chishio

[Chishio]

Agreed. That, or atleast a animation. I think I never saw one from you before =o

Animation yes, character no... but I just started spriting a character today. :P

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My representative character (based on the name Akatsuki) and my new WIP. Please give me some constructive criticism on it so I can improve it before I move further on with it. I actually have drafted on most of the character with pencil in paper and I think everyone will like it.

[snorsorbet]

Look fellow kids!
The proportions are perfect, but not at the loss of anything else.
So, I can't complain about proportions... It seems I can't complain about anything else either.
I say GO FOR IT! I'd love to see this sprite as a character.

[Simoneon]

Agreed. That, or atleast a animation. I think I never saw one from you before =o

Animation yes, character no... but I just started spriting a character today. :P

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My representative character (based on the name Akatsuki) and my new WIP. Please give me some constructive criticism on it so I can improve it before I move further on with it. I actually have drafted on most of the character with pencil in paper and I think everyone will like it.

Chishio,

I love Your sprites, but just one prob... I just can't sit here and look at single pics, I want chars!ad: Sorry for that, but I think it'll be much better if You turn those awesome,excelent sprites into a chars. Please

[chase123]

I also want it to become a character you're sprites are all excellent and the proportions are also good.

shading is very good!

[TheNave]

this... is.... SPARTA AWESOME!!!
wow, I really love all your sprites...

[Chishio]

Update: I have begun working on the punching sprite.
First 2 sprites of punch:

Flashbang:


I character I gave up on a while ago (I just found it on my system.), feel free to use it if you want to...:

Spoiler (Click to View)

[XLittlebob252]

nice punching

hope you make from this more.

~XLittlebob252

[Alectric]

firstly, his pants look like they get puffy when he starts the punch
he is a very elaborate/detailed char, so it will take ages for you to sprite (unless you are super uber fast...im not sure whether you are or not)
another thing:
is he wearing a gas mask? looks just a little weird to me, maybe just the way it converges with his hair? and his feet are a bit small

this is just for some constructive critisism, as i hoped i helped

[prince_freeza]

firstly, his pants look like they get puffy when he starts the punch

got that right alec btw that mask looks something like tha masks of those wast guys ya know..
keep the good work!!

[Chishio]

UBER BUMP: With New Material
Gah... its too detailed IMO... I don't know... I am having trouble spriting. Some rough critiques would be greatly appreciated.




Before you go saying the legs or limbs are too skinny, I was aiming for that look. I am more looking for constructive criticism on the concept and actual sprite. If you can... talk about proportions too... XD