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Ban the Member above you
banned because you can't comment my story then.
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b& because.. i am sorry for that.. but maybe i get internet access there.. but am not sure
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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... The old door before just_a_phil looked like it hadn't been used
for years, the wood was cracked and the paint flaked near the edge.
He was about to turn back as a dangerously soft and sinister voice
spoke out from the other side, "You may ... enter".
just_a_phil regarded the door again, before pushing it gingerly open.

The door creaked eerily as just_a_phil stepped into the dark room,
gloomily lit by the dying flames of the fireplace. A large armchair that
looked in as much dispair as the door did, sat some distance away from
the fire, and such that the chairs occupant was completly enshrouded
in shadow.
The hairs on the back of just_a_phil's neck prickled as the voice spoke again
"I have heard ...". A cold line of sweat ran down just_a_phil's
forehead as the door closed, creaking again and seemingly of its own
accord, behind him " ... that you are going to 'Croatia' soon."
The voice's tone growing darker as it talked.

just_a_phil nodded, albeit shakily, and he said " ... y-Yes, thats right.
i-I'm going with my school, so I won't be back, f-for a week"

The voice didn't respond, nor could just_a_phil see any movement from
the figure in the chair. just_a_phil's feet shifted uncomfortably where
he stood, and he spoke again "w-Well, I'll just get out of your way, then ..."
He didn't see a reaction from the chair, and turned to take his leave,
as quickly as possible...

~

This story may be continued when you return just_a_phil :D enjoy yourself in Croatia, and Banland!
Trust you're all well.
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banned bekoz of no banz
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
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(05-24-2009, 05:48 AM)Magnamancy Wrote:  ... The old door before just_a_phil looked like it hadn't been used
for years, the wood was cracked and the paint flaked near the edge.
He was about to turn back as a dangerously soft and sinister voice
spoke out from the other side, "You may ... enter".
just_a_phil regarded the door again, before pushing it gingerly open.

...

This story may be continued when you return just_a_phil :D enjoy yourself in Croatia, and Banland!

Haha, this is so Magnamancy-style! Are his writing skills amazing or what!?

anyway, banned for spelling "IMPORTATANT" in the spoiler of ur sig wrong.
(It should be Important =D)

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woopsy, banned for telling me that...
* sadbhav goes and corrects the mistake
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banned for having no spelling mistakes in ur sig :)

Though, after checking:
u typed havn't ==> haven't
ur welcome :)

(another ban for that btw)

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yayz banned for complimenting me (my sig)
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banned for being edit-ninja'd :p

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banned for that too...
* sadbhav goes and corrects it again
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