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Forum novel
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Forum novel


ooc: I won't make too many words. For rules, profiles and discussion just look into the discussion thread. Only thing I want to remind you of is the
BACKSTORY
The guard was sitting on a giant stone in the garden of the palace from where he had a great view over the land. Entire green fields reached to the horizon. He watched some little black dots slowly moving into his direction. Soon they would reach the town. Well, it was more than time.
Now the first dots came near enough to notice details. Slowly they transformed into human shapes. After some more minutes he could already recognize their haircolour.
Nearly every kind of humans was represented. Huge warriors from the north with edgy faces came together with their smaller cousins from the south. Especially the people with red and blue hair from the Arctic Volcano in the east stood out against the crowd.
He couldn't really understand why all of those people had been called to the capital city. He knew that there had been riots, something about a resurrected evil king. Some whispered that even the dead were fighting on his side. But he didn't believe any of that rubbish. He hadn't been in one of those villages for years, but could things really change that fast? However there had to be a reason why the king called every fighter into the capital...


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The giant city walls in front of Cen were reaching up into the sky. He took a deep breath. After weeks of wandering he had finally reached the capital city. It was just about time, because it was only a case of days until the emperor would call the fighters for what he intended them to do.
Cen passed the guards and smiled at them. They noticed him but made no move to control him. Probably there were just too many people going in or out of the town.
After a few minutes he reached a big piazza and looked around. All around him faces of various persons filled every single spare. Suddenly he noticed a well-known face.
He immediately went into the direction he saw it, but the crowd made it hard to get ahead. Not only once Cen had to push an obstinate person away. Nevertheless he didn't give up.
Finally he found himself in a back alley. Although the sun shone down from directly above him, only gloomy light reached the lane. He felt insecure.
Where could philus be? Or hadn't it been him at all?
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Philus had a strange feeling as if someone was watching him.He turned around to look at his silent observer but the crowd made it too hard for him to figure it out.
A few close looks at some of the faces and then Philus continued his walk, still looking at his surroundings. The sun was burning on his black coat. "Damn that sun he said to himself baring his long and sharp teeth. As soon as possible Philus tried to reach the next dark alley. He sighed. "Finally a dark place" Philus said out loud. "Philus?" a voice behind him said. Philus turned around and looked at a redhead with green and brown clothes - Cen.

btw aren't we supposed to use our chars name? otherwise it gets complicated :D
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#3
"Why are you resisting the temptation?"
“Because I am not like you. I….I can control you!”
“You don’t believe that. You should stop trying to resist me. No matter how much you try, I will resurface again.”
“I won’t let you. Shut up and stay out of my head.”
“Haven’t you realized it by now? I’m your conscience. You can’t get rid of your conscience, you can only succumb to it.”
“That’s enough! I won’t listen to another word.”
“Don’t you want to know who you really are?”
“…………………..”
“Ahh, I’ve gotten your attention now, haven’t I?”
“Do you know who I am?”
“I can help you find out who you are. But ignoring me won’t help at all.”
“I must know, how will you help me if you are inside me?”
“Have you forgotten who I am along with your past? Anything is possible with me.
“Where must I go?”
“SShhh. I must sense out presences……………………………..I am feeling a familiar presence. It is a long journey from here but if you are willing to go the distance, I can help you.”
“I have no money, no food, nothing to protect myself. How will you help me?”
“Money and food are the least of your worries. And as far as protection goes, my power will suffice.”
“How can I use your power?”
“When the time comes, you will know.”
“So, then where must I go?”
“There is a large city, south of here. That’s where we will find the person that will help us. But be careful on the way and conceal yourself. You….I mean….we….are wanted men.”

Edited: Some ppl couldn't read the maroon text.
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In the forest to the east, Drahcir and Mailliw sprinted at top speed, fleeing from a pursuing army of demons. They were getting tired, and the demons showed no sign of relent.
"Blast," muttered Drahcir, "If this keeps up, we're lunch."
Without warning, Mailliw hit the ground. He had tripped over a tree root.
"What the--" exclaimed Drahcir. He pulled Mailliw back onto his feet. When he looked up, they were already surrounded!
"Uh-oh," Mailliw said.
The demons advanced menacingly towards the two brothers, who retreated to the middle of their circle.
Then, before it could react, Drahcir charged at the demon right in front of him, drew his beamsword, cut it down, and ran through the opening, Mailliw right behind him. They continued to run, until the noises behind them faded.
"Looks like we've lost them," Drahcir stated the obvious. "Now, shall we head to the capital?"
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White.

That’s how you describe this mountain, mount Arytow.

There was a blizzard. A strong one. The snow embraced everything with a white coat. You couldn’t see anything except for a pure white.

But then, from the wood, there was a black dot. A tiny little black dot kept moving toward a small wooden house.

That dot was a human. A young man. He moved slowly and sometime got knock down by the strong wind, and yet he still got up and kept moving forward. One small, but brave human fought against Mother Nature’s rage.

Once he step inside, he removed his hood, reveal a thin, harsh face with one scar running from the left cheek to the chin. He started a fire and quickly removed the frozen coat before the snow start melting.

Nobody wants to catch pneumonia when you can’t go down the mountain to get medicine.

He sat down by a fire, removed the gloves and held his hand out. The fire reflected in a golden ring the man’s wearing.

That man named was Long.

He’s lived alone in this house for most of his life. He casually climbed down the mountain to get the goods from a small village and talk to the villagers, and yet nobody knows his original.

Not even him.

When Long was about to go look for a wine bottle to warm himself up, he heard somebody knocking the door.

‘In this weather?’ Long thought. He moved and opened the door.

Outside the door, there was an old man. He wore a tall pointed blue hat, a long grey cloak, and has a wooden staff. He had a long white beard and bushy eyebrows that stuck out beyond the brim of his hat.

He wore too little compare to the weather.

The old man looked up and said:

“Hello young lad,” His voice is warm and somewhat comfort. But for some reason, Long felt a distant feeling that make him feel rather…. furious. “could you lend this old man a shelter until the blizzard gone?”

Despite the funny feeling he has, Long let him in.
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Treetop's were swaying on the wind. Moonlight was lightening forest. Wolf's were wailing deep in forest. Trees are sleeping. On one tree, next to the road which was leading trough the forest, there was one man sitting. Man covered with shadow. A wraith some would say. His name was Daymio. His mouths was covered with rag. There was blood coming out of his eyes. His vampire teeth's was covered with blood. He was feeding himself. Under the tree there was lying young man. He was dead. He was Daymio's feast. That man was probably traveling to the town. He didn't know what got him. Daymio jumped from the tree. He headed to the town. He was still hungry for blood. Road was leading trough the forest all along to the town. In front of the town gates there was some peasant village. Daymio entered the tavern. He heard that someone need his service. When he entered everybody turned around and with fear in their eyes looked in to him.They all know him but nobody knows his name.
He cam to the bartender. Bartender just showed the doors on the next side of tavern. Daymio entered the room. Some old man was waiting for him. He was brave but in his eyes fear was still visible. He gave him bag with gold. There was 3500 coins.

- Noir. Prince of the capital city, Quarzt. He is your next target. Kill him and you will get double of gold i gave you right now.

- As you wish. Noir will be killed.

- Good.

Daymio left the room. He got out of tavern and walked back to the forest. Deep to the forest....

Hope this is not to long
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Alec walked trough the city. It was Night but he was feeling really well. He summoned a little ball and sends it towards the corner.
He heard a sound of metal hitting glass and the wonderfull sound of crashing glass.
"So somebody awaits me..."
He runned away. He runned out of the city. He left a huge glass barrier after him as he was on the green field.
He looked at the forest.
He jumped on the trees... and landed on his face.
"Damn"
He stumbled over his feets while jumping.
The guards after him laughed.
Then they runned towards him and crashed into the barrier.
Alec smiled and jumped into the dark forrest.
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as Alec traveled through the dark forest he encountered a warrior named "Harold",Alec asked his name and Harold told him.he explained Alec his story.He asked him to join him,then there was an explosion because of the debris Harold was hurt really badly.Then Alec offered his healing abilities and saved Harold.

he asks Alec "what could have caused that explosion".
he replied"i don't know."

sorry it is short i could only come up with this.
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Ok! Time for me to go in capital city! Cya there guys...

It was the quiet and wet morning... Thick rain was falling on hard ground in city Cikuro. Hard and Gris clouds were flying through all the kingdom. You could see some great lightnings in the distance beating the trees in big wet jungle. There was no men on the streets. Everything was so quiet. Only in taverns you could heard poor talking. Anubis was standing in his room, in palace, near the window. His wife Kira enter in their room.
''What's wrong Anubis? I never seen you so serious in your room... Usually you was always smiling.'' Kira said.
''It was never like this in our kingdom. Something evil is rising in some far strange kingdom... I can fell it.''
''Don't trouble your mind with stupid things. Come. Sit with me and relax.'' Kira said and sit on their bed.
''God... I wish, I could be like Sharky. With no worries...''
''But I love you just like that.'' Kira said and started to kissing him.
But for that time somebody arrived on the Cikuro's gate.
''Open the gate!!!'' One guard yelled and the man in black came in. The guards lead that man in the palace through mud and Gris streets. He got a message for a king. After the king read message by emperor from capital city in far kingdom, he called his best fighters. His Lords... Anubis, Tiny and Sharky. King said that they go to help the new emperor. He had his son Noir and that they must protect him. King must stay in city Cikuro, cus Cikuro was attacked almost every day by black demons... And so 3 brothers go to new kingdom, in capital city to help in new upcoming war. There was no troubles on their path. They finally arrived on the open green field lit with the sun and with few white clouds on red sky. From there you could see the capital city... But still, beyon the city and nice weather you could see the dark clouds upcoming with rain and lightnings.
''Haha! We are already here! We haven't got any troubles on our path! Seems that stupid demons finally started to fear us hehehe...'' Sharky said with laughing.
''Hmm... What do you think Anubis? Where are all the demons?'' Tiny asked seriously.
''I think there is more than just a black demons gathering in dark empires... It seems that they are activating volcanoes and awaking terrible creatures in their dark deserted world. That's why there none of them attacked us... That's why the weather is changing.'' Anubis answered
''It seems that many great fighters already arrived form far lands.'' Tiny noticed.
''But non of them is better than us right?! Hahaha!'' Sharky keep laughing.
''Shut up Sharky! Come on! Let's see how is the emperor and his son Noir...'' Anubis said and they go to the capital city, on the border between 2 ages. Ages of peace and war...
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Philus carefully looked at his old friend. "You have grown alot since i have last seen you" he said to Cen. Cen examined Philus as well. "Well yes, i am at least still growing" Cen replied smirking. Philus laughed. "At least i will stay as sexy as i am" Philus continued blinking with his right eye.
Cen looked at him with his mouth open. "You will never change, huh?" he asked his friend. "When time starts to affect me, i probably will" Philus answered. "Ah well, how about we continue our little walk" Cen then said. Philus bared his teeth. "I wish we could stay in the shadows..." he said looking at Cen with his blood-red eyes. Cen just shook his head and left the dark alley behind, hoping that Philus would join him.
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