First mixed character

[dazzapizza]

Ok I did some ctrl c+v ing to make this dude. He is a mix of firen, firzen, julian, loius and deep.




Ok if you have any tips could you plz tell me.

This guy is just a test,Im not going to make a character outta him.

[Silverthorn]

All righty, some suggestions posted as questions...
- What's that black line b/w body and legs?
- Is his right arm falling off or why is it bleeding?
- What are these white pixels in his hair?
- Why is his right arm so far away from his body?
- Why are his right side as well as his left arm so sharply cut off?
- Why doesn't he have any throat?

Just suggestions, things that I personally dislike on the picture. Maybe they're helpful

[dazzapizza]

All righty, some suggestions posted as questions...
- What's that black line b/w body and legs?
- Is his right arm falling off or why is it bleeding?
- What are these white pixels in his hair?
- Why is his right arm so far away from his body?
- Why are his right side as well as his left arm so sharply cut off?
- Why doesn't he have any throat?

Just suggestions, things that I personally dislike on the picture. Maybe they're helpful

-Black line?
-Its not bleeding. Its firens armband thingy.
-I dont know
-ditto
-ditto
-he doesn't have a throat baecause I dont like throats.