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i'm not a spriter but, shading is still misplaced and he still has a fat belly
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The trousers ... =(
C'mon gad don't let me hang down
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niiiice one gad. rly smooth sprites dude. and i love that hair
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04-01-2010, 09:09 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-01-2010, 09:12 AM by SparK.)
the last one is kinda... plastic, I think the shading is too bright, try to use darker tones for the top layers of the shading "the shading contrast is too elevated for the eye apreciation" (i think that's how a medieval professional spriter would put it)
and his shoulders are too high close to the head, it looks like he has negative neck... try to put head a little higher or lower the shoulders and it will be fixed
(sorry about that, i'm not a spriter (bad hand for drawing) but i have good eyes)
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