[Char]Darkraus(on pause for now)

[Darkraus]

Sry ppl,I do not have time to continue,so i'm putting this on pause.I'll finish this by the end of year(i hope)


First time making LF2 character so...its gona take a long time.

Right now,I'm making the sprites.Data...later

I welcome any suggestions or critics so I can improve my character.



Breathing:


Edited Breathing:


Walking:


Edited Walking:


Punching/Attacking:


Edited Punching/Attacking:


Ima fire mah lazar~


Edited cannon

I wanted to make it seemed like wind is blowing against him,so i moved his hair a bit.

[MH-Razen]

Woot - you sprited yourself? It`s not bad

FOr improvement: There`s a part of the hair looking a bit strange when he walks and attack (like a wave in his hair, I`m sure you know what I mean...), maybe you should try to correct this a bit...

[Darkraus]

i edited the punching part...but are u refering to the 'walking/breathing' part?XD

scince im not good at spirting hair,i copied it from bat and recolour it

[Lauli]

Obviously, MH meant the weird shading, that changes every frame.
Like... compare bats original hair and yours. You'll notice that yours mostly changes brightness.

Argh, what did you do to that hair? D:

[Darkraus]

i edited the hair...made them the same for the walking and breathing sprites

made breathing and walking animations seperately

[8obis]

In the breathing gif. the head isn't moving... He looks nice thought.

How about changing the red in the hands to his skin colour?

~RtXaS~

[oliveryungo]

Pretty much everything has been said..
Yeah, the head doesn't look part of the breathing sprite because it doesn't move along with it.
Walking- very nice, except it look a bit bumpy, like the whole body's moving up and down too much.
Attack- Perhaps more frames for the purpler spikey blast coming out? It would make it look smoother.

Just a question-why do his clothes shimmer? Not saying it's bad, though.

[Darkraus]

erm guys,this happened when i tried to use the sprites...


there this black thing on the head...any idea how to remove it?


ill change the breathing sprites soon ^^.
ty for comments

[Eddie]

They're dirty pixels, go over with a completely black brush or pencil and just go around his head until it's all gone.

Problem is then solved - hope this helps.


Eddie


Edit:
I r Ninja. *Puts on my ninja nightsuit and mask* - *Follows this with rapid hand motions* - *Disappear into the darkness as if by magic*

[oliveryungo]

Did you cut and paste the head for the sprites? And didn't do it very well? If so, then I believe it's the extra bits from your cutting and pasting. Just go over the sprite so you don't have any leftover bits.

EDIT: ARGH NINJA'D