New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252

[XLittlebob252]

its not fiery thingies its lighthing.
and his floating

[LutiChris]

its not fiery thingies its lighthing.

actually in my eyes he looks like he's holding a bunch of sticks

anyways...
first off to make them look less stick'y...erm
lightning allways is rly bright so the center of each line is allways white not partially yellow
the outer layer should be yellow (preferably blue but it won't matter)
2nd lightning is straight forward, do u mean electricity (which is free-formed)?
3rdly...when releasing such form of energy... it's best to show his fingers- rather than a balky hand
your sprite makes it seem as though he is gripping onto it, thts why i assumed he was holding onto sticks
look at how davis releases his balls or how firzen's hands are positioned in a normal stance...
does this help?

[XLittlebob252]

lol made me laugh!!!
any way im trying to improve in any way so i tried lighting which is new to me...
i want to be able to sprite in any position and good

[LutiChris]

the center will always emit white, and the outside u put it's bright color

[Whaat]

Well, i was bored so:

Make it smthing like that.

[XLittlebob252]

[Whaat]

Good, but make center of lightning bit more bright :/ or is that white in the centre? If it is, make it more, and that blue is supposed to be bright, not dark.

[PsychoPixels]

For future reference, any similar effects you plan to do, I'd suggest placing the product on a black background. It'll be easier for us to see, and will look a lot better. (Thanks to Luti for mentioning this to me on the sprite contest thread.)

[XLittlebob252]

[Ragor]

Neck is too tall. Rest of it is good.