08-16-2010, 01:02 PM
Wow amazing! Your good at writing story. I esspecialy like the prologue (dunno why).
"who would have thought that doing some thing for the good of every one would leave you being cursed"
i really liked that.
"who would have thought that doing some thing for the good of every one would leave you being cursed"
i really liked that.
"I'm the president of the shadow government
The grand governor of the federal reserve
Public enemy of the society
The one you cannot see the thirty three degree"
The grand governor of the federal reserve
Public enemy of the society
The one you cannot see the thirty three degree"