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>try making it longer and express his emotions along the way slowly, cause when - "Sadness, rage and fury all swept through Davis at once. " when i read that line, i didn't feel anything, if you started with a proper beginning, showing the bond and love between mother and son.
well, that was not the important bit :P I haven't seen the original LF2 or any other LF2 mods / comics featuring his mother XD
but yes, it was a bit rushed, because I lost my motivation to write any further ^ ^
>it's nice to learn how Davis got his energy punches
it's more like how he got this skill:
![[Image: celf2preview4davisrd9.gif]](http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6295/celf2preview4davisrd9.gif)
well, that was not the important bit :P I haven't seen the original LF2 or any other LF2 mods / comics featuring his mother XD
but yes, it was a bit rushed, because I lost my motivation to write any further ^ ^
>it's nice to learn how Davis got his energy punches
it's more like how he got this skill:
you don't want to see this (Click to View)
the other by xFire