08-22-2010, 02:14 PM
I'd suggest to change the palette, it's too bland in color. Color over the black outlines (unless you're aiming for another style), but in this case as an LF2 style, you're not. It seems you have more than one color of the same variation (in shading terms). I've done a very quick edit (5 min) to your sprite to show you what I mean. Don't use this instead of yours, you won't learn that way, use it as a reference (I'm not satisfied with the way it turned out).

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