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09-12-2010, 08:26 AM
For hair shading you should shade the little streaks. It seems like you've done that a bit, but it isn't visible enough.
Other than that he looks quite good. I'd suggest doing a sword on your own instead of taking deep's (which doesn't really look like Rebellion). Additionally, you should work on the transition between head and body. Maybe add a little neck?
Shading doesn't look bad, but partly looks like pillow shading (pillow shading: The central part of something is highlighted; LF2-shading: Sun is in the top-right corner, everything on the right handside is highlighted, everything on the left darkened). While you got good shading on the trousers, the upper body could need a bit of work.
It's a good looking sprite nonetheless and I'm sure you'll be able to improve it even more.
Also I'd like to see him with Ebony and Ivory
Other than that he looks quite good. I'd suggest doing a sword on your own instead of taking deep's (which doesn't really look like Rebellion). Additionally, you should work on the transition between head and body. Maybe add a little neck?
Shading doesn't look bad, but partly looks like pillow shading (pillow shading: The central part of something is highlighted; LF2-shading: Sun is in the top-right corner, everything on the right handside is highlighted, everything on the left darkened). While you got good shading on the trousers, the upper body could need a bit of work.
It's a good looking sprite nonetheless and I'm sure you'll be able to improve it even more.
Also I'd like to see him with Ebony and Ivory