08-19-2008, 06:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-19-2008, 07:32 PM by Silverthorn.)
(08-19-2008, 02:14 PM)~Dome~ Wrote: Critics would be nice.
I also need suggestions for wind attacks.
There you go
- Let's start with the feet. I'm not sure, is he wearing sandals or is it the shading. Whatever it is, it looks weird...
- (for the people like me that are a bit more realistic :P) Actually, you can't pull out a thick/broad/big sword out of such a thin scabbard. Making it wider or the sword smaller would probably still look good, if not even better
- Look at his left arm. The perpective is kinda off. I mean, when you look at the character from that position, the arm should be more hidden. Moving it around one or two pixels to the left (behind the body) should solve that.
- nothing, I just wanted to have four points :P
Kayz, now that I finished my awesome 4-points-list of what I don't like, I'll also make a list of the things that I like, self-evidently 4 points
- The first 20 pixels.
- The next 20 pixels.
- The next 20 pixels.
- The last 20 pixels.
Or, everything :P
(08-19-2008, 02:14 PM)~Dome~ Wrote: I also need suggestions for wind attacks.
Here you go:
- A tornado (preferrably a stronger attack)
- An up-wind that'll throw the character into the air
- hovering (?)
- A wind-block which will deflect any enemy's ball-attacks (is that actually possible? Dunno :P)
- A down-wind that'll push the enemies to the ground.
- A gust that'll blow dirt into the enemies' eyes so that they won't be able to act for a short time
- "Move as fast as the wind" to another place
- A sword-throw that'll pierce the enemy (therefore you lose your sword)
- A weather change
All for now
Hope you can do something with this
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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