The pose seems fine to me, only the shoulder shouldn't go exactly horizontal.
Have you tried giving him single fingers? I wouldn't bother, it doesn't befit LF2-characters too good, at least in my opinion.
As chase already said, the hair needs some work. The streaks for the front part are just too long. Long hair is fine, but right now it feels like the streaks don't consist of several single hairs. They are like just one thing, I hope you get what I mean. If not, tell me.
And you should at least indicate that he has eyes.
Have you tried giving him single fingers? I wouldn't bother, it doesn't befit LF2-characters too good, at least in my opinion.
As chase already said, the hair needs some work. The streaks for the front part are just too long. Long hair is fine, but right now it feels like the streaks don't consist of several single hairs. They are like just one thing, I hope you get what I mean. If not, tell me.
And you should at least indicate that he has eyes.