I think you are making it really good. I like the actions and everything. But, i the third line(from top to bottom), in that one after third frame, maybe add one more frame? If it is too fast it is ok, if not, add one more frame after the third frame so that it looks smooth. Other than that Good luck!
EDIT: He looks more evil in the face pic.
EDIT: He looks more evil in the face pic.

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