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There are a few things that I would like to point out, things that are both good and bad in the design, so I'll split it into two sections starting with bad.
Bad:
- His upper body seems to have great musculature... so why don't his upper arms and shoulders?
- Very bright details on armour (Blue pointed this out before me god damnit).
- I would have made gauntlets same colour as shoes on feet, not a lighter shade (personal preference).
- Drop some hair infront of the mask, like a strand or two in the black (it looks as if his face mask pulled his hair back)
- Belt is slightly off centre (body seems to be turned slightly towards the screen whereas legs are slightly to the characters left. Belt should not follow upper body but infact lower body, with which the abs should also be slightly facing his left).
- Shouldn't we be able to see the extending pieces of the neckwear?
Good:
- Gauntlet and leg armour - nice design.
- Hair colour.
- Mask and costume.
- Musculature on the upper body.
No I don't mean to say there is more bad than good, overall I know it's a far better work than I could hope to produce - however I just wanted to point out the main features that got me when I looked at the sprite (first 5 seconds of looking at it).
I look forward to seeing this character move on to being completed, very looking forward to it infact. So good luck, hope you get it done in a reasonable timeframe.
Eddie
Bad:
- His upper body seems to have great musculature... so why don't his upper arms and shoulders?
- Very bright details on armour (Blue pointed this out before me god damnit).
- I would have made gauntlets same colour as shoes on feet, not a lighter shade (personal preference).
- Drop some hair infront of the mask, like a strand or two in the black (it looks as if his face mask pulled his hair back)
- Belt is slightly off centre (body seems to be turned slightly towards the screen whereas legs are slightly to the characters left. Belt should not follow upper body but infact lower body, with which the abs should also be slightly facing his left).
- Shouldn't we be able to see the extending pieces of the neckwear?
Good:
- Gauntlet and leg armour - nice design.
- Hair colour.
- Mask and costume.
- Musculature on the upper body.
No I don't mean to say there is more bad than good, overall I know it's a far better work than I could hope to produce - however I just wanted to point out the main features that got me when I looked at the sprite (first 5 seconds of looking at it).
I look forward to seeing this character move on to being completed, very looking forward to it infact. So good luck, hope you get it done in a reasonable timeframe.
Eddie
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