04-29-2011, 03:01 PM
okay you have to use light and shadow better imo...
you can't really see where the light is coming form at this sprite.
look at the shoes for example: at the right shoe( from us) the light comes from the right and at the left shoe it comes from the left o_O
try to let the light come form a single direction. Maybe you get what i mean with this:
the green marked places is where you made shadows, bit there should be light.
The red places should be dark, not lighten up.
Also you have to work out the hair a bit. I know it's hard (i'm not good in spriting hair 2^^) but just read a few tutorials and it should be better
Greetz mundvoll_
you can't really see where the light is coming form at this sprite.
look at the shoes for example: at the right shoe( from us) the light comes from the right and at the left shoe it comes from the left o_O
try to let the light come form a single direction. Maybe you get what i mean with this:
the green marked places is where you made shadows, bit there should be light.
The red places should be dark, not lighten up.
Also you have to work out the hair a bit. I know it's hard (i'm not good in spriting hair 2^^) but just read a few tutorials and it should be better
Greetz mundvoll_