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05-10-2011, 11:30 AM
[Rant start]
First of all, wow. I really like the fact that you don't shrug away from drawing girls. How about creating an iconic trap character like Bridget from Guilty Gear? Think about it.
But I'm a critic here, not a driveller. You have a very distinct and unique coloring style. It's unprecedented at your young age. In fact, I don't see any room for improvement. You're that good. Right, not a driveller.
Your poses are fantastic from a mangasque (I just came up with this word) point of view. Very stylized anatomy combined with incredible painting technique make it stand out from a lot of styles I've seen back in the day. Right, right, not a driveller.
Here's my critics: I sense that you don't have a comic type plotline. You draw fine one pages, but that's all. This is not unbiased coming from me. Look at your own work - there are too many guys doing the "Come at me, bro" pose, i.e. spreading their hands like they don't know what the hell's going on amidst the chaos of smoke and debris. That, in my opinion, is the stage where your script is at. In smoke and debris.
But not to sound too discouraging here. I'll say that it's especially nice to see how you had progressed in the Art department through the years in this thread. My suggestion is as follows: team up with someone to come up with a story-line and enter a manga competition in your country (I would be surprised, if there isn't one). Test your luck there. Even if you won't get in the top three (which, too, I would be surprised), you'll come back with a hell of a lot of experience.
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First of all, wow. I really like the fact that you don't shrug away from drawing girls. How about creating an iconic trap character like Bridget from Guilty Gear? Think about it.
But I'm a critic here, not a driveller. You have a very distinct and unique coloring style. It's unprecedented at your young age. In fact, I don't see any room for improvement. You're that good. Right, not a driveller.
Your poses are fantastic from a mangasque (I just came up with this word) point of view. Very stylized anatomy combined with incredible painting technique make it stand out from a lot of styles I've seen back in the day. Right, right, not a driveller.
Here's my critics: I sense that you don't have a comic type plotline. You draw fine one pages, but that's all. This is not unbiased coming from me. Look at your own work - there are too many guys doing the "Come at me, bro" pose, i.e. spreading their hands like they don't know what the hell's going on amidst the chaos of smoke and debris. That, in my opinion, is the stage where your script is at. In smoke and debris.
But not to sound too discouraging here. I'll say that it's especially nice to see how you had progressed in the Art department through the years in this thread. My suggestion is as follows: team up with someone to come up with a story-line and enter a manga competition in your country (I would be surprised, if there isn't one). Test your luck there. Even if you won't get in the top three (which, too, I would be surprised), you'll come back with a hell of a lot of experience.
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