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Little Fighter: Calm Before the Storm
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(05-13-2011, 07:48 PM)klodasmone Wrote:  I, like Davis, yearn for some action. But that’s how you built your narrative.
Indeed, introductory chapter are a must :P
It will get to action too, but first things first.

(05-13-2011, 07:48 PM)klodasmone Wrote:  Though I am uncertain about the “seven years ago”, or maybe that was a memory from Davis’ childhood. How old do you imagine Davis is at the present?
Yeah, about that...I guess these "Little Fighters" aren't so "little" as one would expect. I would put them at 24-25 years old in the present, meaning they were 17-18 in the flashbacks.

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That "the" was a typo :P

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RE: Little Fighter: Calm Before the Storm - by Divisor - 05-13-2011, 08:15 PM



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