(05-13-2011, 07:48 PM)klodasmone Wrote: I, like Davis, yearn for some action. But that’s how you built your narrative.Indeed, introductory chapter are a must :P
It will get to action too, but first things first.
(05-13-2011, 07:48 PM)klodasmone Wrote: Though I am uncertain about the “seven years ago”, or maybe that was a memory from Davis’ childhood. How old do you imagine Davis is at the present?Yeah, about that...I guess these "Little Fighters" aren't so "little" as one would expect. I would put them at 24-25 years old in the present, meaning they were 17-18 in the flashbacks.
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That "the" was a typo :P