LF2 (What's your take on the story?)

[Zabobula]

Alright, finally here's my take:


Davis and Dennis: Davis and Dennis are known as the Brothers of Tai Hom. They grow up in Tai Hom not knowing who their parents were. No one took them in but the two managed to survive living in the village on their own. In order to survive and protect themselves Davis and Dennis developed their own street-fighting technique. Davis's style centered around fighting with his hands. But Dennis's power centered mainly in his kicks so Davis helped him to strengthen his style of fighting. The two would eventually grow up and move to the city where they went to school at CUHK. They made friends quickly with other people who went their. After school, they (mainly Davis) would showcase their fighting skills with fellow classmates. But as they made more friends, they obtained enemies as well. Mark, a bully and a felon, and his rag-tag crew of Bandits would constantly cause trouble with them.


Woody: The younger brother to the King of the Great Wall, Louis. Woody is a double-agent who was given the task by his older brother Louis to obtain information from the Land of Ice and Fire's ruler, Julian. Woody has a special watch that allows him to teleport in wide ranges. He has a very well-rounded fighting skill utilizing his unorthodox hand-to-hand combat with a special power called Crimson Fury. He learned this power from his good friend Deep. Woody also has a close relationship with Davis and Dennis. Occasionally, he helps them train for combat. Every year there is a fighting tournament at the HK Coliseum and Woody and Davis and Dennis are some of the top competitors.


Louis/Ex: The King of the Great Wall, Louis is the ruler of the land that extends beyond the Land of Ice and Fire. He also controls the Woodlands but he gave Henry the Archer, one of his top warriors, control over the land. Louis learned his power from the Monks who live beyond the land of Ice and Fire. They taught him the Phoenix Palm, one of the strongest powers ever created. But they only taught him the basic technique. It was up to Louis to develop it to his liking from therein. And he did just that. He learned to channel his power and created a transformation technique which he called EX. During the transformation, he channels the power of the Phoenix Palm technique through his body which shoots his armor off his body. His weapon, the Phoenix Trident, extends from his armor and is very lethal in battle.



* Louis's greatest enemy is his former partner John the Dark Sorcerer. The two used to control the Great Wall together but John had an extreme lust for greater power. Louis defeated him and a grueling battle but before Louis was going to kill him, John used his magic to escape. John now serves under Julian, the ruler of Ice and Fire. But John plans to overthrow Julian and become the ruler of Ice and Fire himself.




I'll right more later. I'm outta juice right now.