07-15-2011, 10:44 AM
Not bad. But the story is abit short. Try to make it more intersting like:
-Louis just try to defeat Julian.(Come on! how did he recognized Julian, no one told him.)
-Louis learn pheonix palm.(Tell us how long he trained, how many times he fainted because of training, how did he finally learn it.....)
Good luck!
-Louis just try to defeat Julian.(Come on! how did he recognized Julian, no one told him.)
-Louis learn pheonix palm.(Tell us how long he trained, how many times he fainted because of training, how did he finally learn it.....)
Good luck!

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~Thank You All and Farewell
~Goodbye, LFE.
RIP - 14/04/2014
~Thank You All and Farewell
~Goodbye, LFE.
RIP - 14/04/2014