Little fighter - another reasonable beginning

[LSwarley]

Not bad. But the story is abit short. Try to make it more intersting like:
-Louis just try to defeat Julian.(Come on! how did he recognized Julian, no one told him.)
-Louis learn pheonix palm.(Tell us how long he trained, how many times he fainted because of training, how did he finally learn it.....)

Good luck!

well i wrote that after i woke up from my midday sleep xD (yeah i do sleep in the midday xD)
sigh and i thought it would be enough for the past xD
i do plan on writing about him when the real trip begins
but i do understand how u feel xD i edited that text quiet alot of times now and still think there is something missing
well after i add some of ur suggestions we will see, but if i write a past like that for each char then omg! ive never wrote that much be4 xD

E: about julian he encountered alot of creatures while fighting his way free without much effort, but he couldnt move when he encountered julian =p sure i add some more details
E2: added ur suggestions xD but cant think of more details or just too lazy cause phoenix palm..

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Added Davis/Woody/Dennis past

need comments/suggestions/critism pls