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yay! thats the critism i wanted to see =p thx ^^
to the notes: i know that =p, but i had those ideas in my mind, and i wanted to write them down, before i change anything is the storyline. ^^
and ofc im aware that the additional info are always welcome, but i never felt like writing/editing =p. (lazy)
btw: im not good at describing fighting scenes ^^, i can imagine them very good, though.
Mostly my words dont get the right effect it should have in this case =p.
Davis/Woody/Dennis: rlly? i thought it was more improvisational =p in any case, if some skills of them arent noted, then they will surely get them along their adventure ^^, there are a whole bunch of possibilities ^^.
Henry: hmm.. ill take that into account. to be honest: i totally forgot the sonata of death of him! xD just had an idea, and ill update him soon enough =p
John: thx, because his part is the longest? well, however like i said Davis/Woody/Dennis right now can do only the basics of melee. theyre like adolescent, and dont have the calm for any focus(manaconsuming attacks), but they can fight because of their reflexes (fighting against a wild animal needs reflexes and speed). Btw: Johns past is a mix of alot of story which created a cliche =p or so i think/thought about it while writing
Background: hmmm.... thats like u said, the biggest thing that is bothering me too.
But ive never felt like studying the single backgrounds nor i have payed attention to them while playing, so basically i dont know anything about them, and unless i get into the mood of continuing the story it will take awhile to establish them into the story =p
Deep: the sword is not a problem, but the reason. i have a really good one for him, but it would contradict the prologue of a peaceful world =p. sword=fights/war prologue=peace x.x id have to change the prologue, but all stories would be affected.
Right now im too lazy to think of an elegant way to fix it. (btw: john story, he follows and she thinks some scavenger is following is also against the prologue, so i have to change it =p)
Grammar and style: thx, =p but like u said the tense is my problem ^^ thats what my teacher also says, and its the reason y i never get the best score in exams =p
E: what the... so many " =p "
got to change that habit
E2: just read through the prologue: wtf! did i really wrote it like that? idk y but i thought that i wrote something longer, with the words "peaceful", "no bad things" or something nvm i can continue the story without hesitation now! proves that my memory got worse...
added Deep past grasp
hmm its longer than a grasp though =p cant finish him right now
to the notes: i know that =p, but i had those ideas in my mind, and i wanted to write them down, before i change anything is the storyline. ^^
and ofc im aware that the additional info are always welcome, but i never felt like writing/editing =p. (lazy)
btw: im not good at describing fighting scenes ^^, i can imagine them very good, though.
Mostly my words dont get the right effect it should have in this case =p.
Davis/Woody/Dennis: rlly? i thought it was more improvisational =p in any case, if some skills of them arent noted, then they will surely get them along their adventure ^^, there are a whole bunch of possibilities ^^.
Henry: hmm.. ill take that into account. to be honest: i totally forgot the sonata of death of him! xD just had an idea, and ill update him soon enough =p
John: thx, because his part is the longest? well, however like i said Davis/Woody/Dennis right now can do only the basics of melee. theyre like adolescent, and dont have the calm for any focus(manaconsuming attacks), but they can fight because of their reflexes (fighting against a wild animal needs reflexes and speed). Btw: Johns past is a mix of alot of story which created a cliche =p or so i think/thought about it while writing
Background: hmmm.... thats like u said, the biggest thing that is bothering me too.
But ive never felt like studying the single backgrounds nor i have payed attention to them while playing, so basically i dont know anything about them, and unless i get into the mood of continuing the story it will take awhile to establish them into the story =p
Deep: the sword is not a problem, but the reason. i have a really good one for him, but it would contradict the prologue of a peaceful world =p. sword=fights/war prologue=peace x.x id have to change the prologue, but all stories would be affected.
Right now im too lazy to think of an elegant way to fix it. (btw: john story, he follows and she thinks some scavenger is following is also against the prologue, so i have to change it =p)
Grammar and style: thx, =p but like u said the tense is my problem ^^ thats what my teacher also says, and its the reason y i never get the best score in exams =p
E: what the... so many " =p "
got to change that habitE2: just read through the prologue: wtf! did i really wrote it like that? idk y but i thought that i wrote something longer, with the words "peaceful", "no bad things" or something
nvm i can continue the story without hesitation now! proves that my memory got worse...added Deep past grasp
hmm its longer than a grasp though =p cant finish him right now
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My first char: a rudolf mod <--- waiting for comments
LF story reasonable beginning <--clicky (Dont u dare not to leave a comment!)
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Fan of Jerry Hawks LF2 Fan movie, just epic animations~