Hey, finally we get to see something else from you.
Well... the song, it's not bad. I'm not the hugest fan of hiphop and there are some flaws here and there, but still, not bad ;)
The thing that probably bugs me most is the lead synth. It's good and catchy, nice for the intro, but after about 0:15 it's just too distractive. I think it's very similar to that other song of yours, where you used one sound sample over and over and over again.
I don't know, the melody could even stay the same, there just needs to be some variety to it.
Also, since you got that nice small studio equipment of yours, why don't you try and record your own percussion? You don't even have to get a full acoustic drum set for it. You can also edit the crap out of various claps/hits/etc. I once got a nice big-drum sound by smashing a leather chair, haha.
But I gotta say, I like the bass a lot!!! (Simon aka. Simon agrees) It's used just in the right time and it sounds awesome!
Okay, hope you read this, peace out. ;D
Well... the song, it's not bad. I'm not the hugest fan of hiphop and there are some flaws here and there, but still, not bad ;)
The thing that probably bugs me most is the lead synth. It's good and catchy, nice for the intro, but after about 0:15 it's just too distractive. I think it's very similar to that other song of yours, where you used one sound sample over and over and over again.
I don't know, the melody could even stay the same, there just needs to be some variety to it.
Also, since you got that nice small studio equipment of yours, why don't you try and record your own percussion? You don't even have to get a full acoustic drum set for it. You can also edit the crap out of various claps/hits/etc. I once got a nice big-drum sound by smashing a leather chair, haha.
But I gotta say, I like the bass a lot!!! (Simon aka. Simon agrees) It's used just in the right time and it sounds awesome!
Okay, hope you read this, peace out. ;D