09-12-2011, 11:50 PM
Well it looks like you have a problem in understanding masculine and feminine characters. At first the sprite looks good with its shading and body propotions. But then upon close view, it is found that the sprite has a lot of weak points. Firstly, the arms look like broken bamboo sticks (sorry bamboori). Secondly the muscles again are not carved properly. They are more straightened up, which is wrong. Thirdly, u have missed a lot of detailing on the structure. See the pic one more time.

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