10-20-2011, 06:53 PM
Eyes are a bit better, BUT:
- mouth is still barely visible
- no separation between chin and chest (as in: no neck and no contrast between the aforementioned)
- hair-shape implies a skull which is awkwardly leaned backwards (just let the hair stretch a bit more to the right to fix that)
- eyes.... (yes, still :P) Their alignment gives the char somewhat an o_O expression where one eye is a tad lower than the other.
- mouth is still barely visible
- no separation between chin and chest (as in: no neck and no contrast between the aforementioned)
- hair-shape implies a skull which is awkwardly leaned backwards (just let the hair stretch a bit more to the right to fix that)
- eyes.... (yes, still :P) Their alignment gives the char somewhat an o_O expression where one eye is a tad lower than the other.
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
» Gallery | » Sprites | » DeviantArt
~ Breaking LFE since 2008 ~
"Freeze, you're under vrest!" - Mark, probably.
» Gallery | » Sprites | » DeviantArt