01-28-2012, 08:07 PM
(01-28-2012, 11:08 AM)Bla bla bla 44 Wrote:The filename tells me he's supposed to be a "Fire Ghost". However, he looks quite solid. My suggestion would be to add some streaks of yellow over the red to make him appear a bit more "ghostly" (

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(01-28-2012, 11:08 AM)Bla bla bla 44 Wrote:Doesn't quite look like like standing, rather like squatting. And that's good, don't stick with creating standing-poses over an over again. Different outfits, different poses. The more, variation, the better.
Also, the placing of highlights & shadows seems to be a bit random. The face indicates a lightsource from the top right, whilst the shins are lit from the bottom (both from the outside, btw. That's not really working as well).
(01-28-2012, 11:08 AM)Bla bla bla 44 Wrote:Yeh, perspective of the wings is a tad off. Also, the typical issue with features added: dark character-outlines are still visible, on top of the wings. Shouldn't be.
Shading isn't quite visible, too.
So, hope that was somewhat helpful. Keep going, you're getting there

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