My story contest

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I'm in (first time to write a story ). So, here we go

In a village called Mabina two brothers were born Hachigo and Foron. One with an ability of electricity and the other one was extremely smart. When they grew up they've found out that they were special. The smart brother Foron invented a lightbulb with a special ability to turn everything into ash but did not know how to start it. Hachigo knowing on his electric powers turned on the bulb. They got out and pointed to the window and a weird black cloud got out of the bulb. It went right into a chicken that was running from a man. The chicken turned into ashes and the man had a weird expression. He looked at the brothers and started to chase them. They were running and then they stopped because the cloud from the lightbulb turned into a cloud monster. They were all scared as the monster started roaring. Foron immediately thinked of a plan and told his brother Hachigo. The plan was Hachigo to bother the monster while Foron restarted the bulb and get the monster in it and destroyed. That's what they did. While Hachigo was bothering the monster Foron immediately restarted the bulb and the monster got in it. Then he broke the bulb and it was destroyed. Foron then sweared that he never will make another unsafe invention again. THE END.

Hope you liked it.