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04-16-2012, 02:03 PM
This one's looking pretty great so far, really good job!
My advise is just minor stuff here and there. For example, the side-view of the caterpillar makes it a bit less interesting to look at; especially because the worm faces away from the fight. It would look cooler if it was in a position similar to
Basically, looking at what's happening and, at the same time, smoking 
Then, the ground. I think, it could get some nice additions by adding some elements in there. Leaves, sticks, pebbles, patches of moss, stuff like that. Just to have something that distracts from the emptiness.
Nothing particularly important that comes to my mind right now except for those two things. Just moar details. MOAR OF EVERYTHING!
My advise is just minor stuff here and there. For example, the side-view of the caterpillar makes it a bit less interesting to look at; especially because the worm faces away from the fight. It would look cooler if it was in a position similar to
this. (Click to View)
![[Image: Hookah-Smoking%252BCaterpillar.jpg]](http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_F-nZil23-8E/SuXfNiBLkII/AAAAAAAAAmU/tgjFBit4G_0/s400/Hookah-Smoking%252BCaterpillar.jpg)
Then, the ground. I think, it could get some nice additions by adding some elements in there. Leaves, sticks, pebbles, patches of moss, stuff like that. Just to have something that distracts from the emptiness.
Nothing particularly important that comes to my mind right now except for those two things. Just moar details. MOAR OF EVERYTHING!
Silverthorn / Blue Phoenix
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