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So far I've readed to part 3. I got no complains on your english(it's better than mine when it comes to writing 
) and about the story itself... Just a little I miss characters description, how they look... I like it more when you(autor) writes; he has hair like this, eyes like this, few info about body or clothes and so on...(outlook tells a lot about person) As for the story. It's really great. I enjoy reading such dark fantasy and a bit romance between Ajan and that wolf girl Srazih. It's just unusual to me that Srazih can get so close to Ajan who's complete stranger to her :o Either way, he must be very pretty boy or he must have something in heart that attracts women. Keep it up mate =3
BTW: I'm using red and I see it anyway =3
) and about the story itself... Just a little I miss characters description, how they look... I like it more when you(autor) writes; he has hair like this, eyes like this, few info about body or clothes and so on...(outlook tells a lot about person) As for the story. It's really great. I enjoy reading such dark fantasy and a bit romance between Ajan and that wolf girl Srazih. It's just unusual to me that Srazih can get so close to Ajan who's complete stranger to her :o Either way, he must be very pretty boy or he must have something in heart that attracts women. Keep it up mate =3BTW: I'm using red and I see it anyway =3
(04-01-2012, 02:39 PM)Alblaka Wrote: (useless quotes: "OMG AWESOME STORY MADE BY GODLIKE ALBLAKA SO COOOLZ!!1!" - "critique" >.>).I lold. X,D
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