05-27-2012, 03:58 AM
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The things i marked with red color needs fixing. The hair obstructs the dimension of the face. Means The face looks flat because of the hair and also because of less contrast in shading.
As for the coat, since it is inner-side of his coat, it shouldn't be that much white. Try adding more grey to it make it look that it is in the back of the characters leg or the inner coat. If it isnt the inner-coat. dont bother :P . Needs more contrast to give the clarity of the image. At the moment i agree with what Just Me said.

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