Aw, I didn't mind a delay, I'm just glad to hear from ya! It was fun to write! And yeah, the word limit was a ball and chain for both stories.
In the Incantation story, I kinda meant it to be sudden; my main point was to give it a morbid end. Corpses fusing together in a bloody mess does the trick nicely, in my opinion. xD
And in retrospect, I totally agree. The drunkenness is way too sudden/unexplained. <commence tiny revisions>
In the Incantation story, I kinda meant it to be sudden; my main point was to give it a morbid end. Corpses fusing together in a bloody mess does the trick nicely, in my opinion. xD
And in retrospect, I totally agree. The drunkenness is way too sudden/unexplained. <commence tiny revisions>
Henry David Thoreau Wrote:Let your life be a counter-friction to stop the machine.