My musics (YouTube)

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Do not worry, if you want the BEST advice with girls, just go to 4chan /b/. If you follow their advice, there's no chance of failing!

On a little more serious note though: you create nice melodies but somehow, they just miss the extra-spice. You know, they'd go quite well as a background-tune in some video games because it flows nicely. On the contrary, if you want it to be a song to stand out on its own, you'll need some highlights. For example, check out some classical pieces: click me or me or me.

Also, you really need to play on a grand piano. Not only because it sounds better but also because the feeling of playing on such a thing is awesome