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Bamboori's Sprites
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all right, and here is episode who-knows-the-number of BLUE PHOENIX'S BASHING :D

hmm, doesn't seem that you changed terribly many things, so let's state the obvious things: You pretty much darkened Bandit's pants, and brightened up his hat-thingy. The face-pic is a little blurry and, to be brutally honest (like usual), I'm not a big fan of the way you made it. Of course, I can only speak of myself, but the face really doesn't look that appealing to me...
I took into consideration that this is your first re-coloration, and since we all started like that, I won't call your work any bad names, unlike some others here might do. However, there is a bunch of space for improvement left. Let's start with the thing that I always look at in the first place: the fire-frames (lol?). NEVER, NEVER, NEVER EVER select them when you change hue, brightness, or saturation!!! They'll start looking unrealistic. In your thingy, you can barely see a difference, but imagine you step up to the next step, changing the colors drastically. For example, making Bandit's cap blue. Your flames will turn blue, too. Kinda bad, I think. And there we are at the next thing you should practice: the color management. See, this isn't very appealing to me to see a slightly edited Bandit-sprite, I'd appreciate some changes like a green cap or purple shirt. Your skin looks a little, sorry to say so, boring...

Don't get me wrong, although I call this thingy "bashing", I do not want to make your work bad. I want to make it better by revealing the things that I'm unsatisfied with. Most of the time, it'll help you (why most of the time? Because sometimes I myself talk crap :P).

With that being said, try better next time, you have some great skills that just need to be trained ;)
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Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-08-2008, 05:35 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by snorsorbet - 10-08-2008, 05:39 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-08-2008, 05:39 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Silverthorn - 10-08-2008, 06:17 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-08-2008, 07:41 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by snorsorbet - 10-12-2008, 06:31 AM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-15-2008, 01:16 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by kubamaster93 - 10-15-2008, 01:20 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Gad - 10-16-2008, 07:34 AM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-29-2008, 05:36 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by kubamaster93 - 10-29-2008, 05:50 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 10-29-2008, 06:10 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 08-06-2010, 01:53 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by PsychoPixels - 08-06-2010, 03:54 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Bamboori - 08-06-2010, 03:59 PM
RE: Bamboori's Sprites - by Ragor - 08-11-2010, 12:01 AM



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