i dont have to pm you anymore.. he explained everything (i also had some other things in mind)
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![[Image: byrne.png]](http://imageshack.us/a/img515/2655/byrne.png)
This dark line on his shirt have job to split chest muscles and abdominals parts(well, chest muscles and abdominals through shirt makes shading like this).. atm in your sprite line has to low position, that makes chest muscles huge and abdominals too small.
Agree with Exg9 you should learn making small details like wrinkles on his shirt, strands of the hair etc.(using 1 px brush, make smtgh like exg9's example)
some feedback
![[Image: byrne.png]](http://imageshack.us/a/img515/2655/byrne.png)
This dark line on his shirt have job to split chest muscles and abdominals parts(well, chest muscles and abdominals through shirt makes shading like this).. atm in your sprite line has to low position, that makes chest muscles huge and abdominals too small.
Agree with Exg9 you should learn making small details like wrinkles on his shirt, strands of the hair etc.(using 1 px brush, make smtgh like exg9's example)

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