Poll: Which story/ies did you like best?
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LeoGautama
4.00%
4 4.00%
davis60
10.00%
10 10.00%
LutiChris
11.00%
11 11.00%
The Lost Global Mod
9.00%
9 9.00%
Azriel
10.00%
10 10.00%
koori-youkai
8.00%
8 8.00%
Dr. Time
9.00%
9 9.00%
Reaper
14.00%
14 14.00%
BluePhoenix
14.00%
14 14.00%
empirefantasy
2.00%
2 2.00%
Hero Destroyer
4.00%
4 4.00%
EXG9
5.00%
5 5.00%
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Contest #21: Writing challenge - VOTING
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For BP:
Thanks for the comments.
BP Wrote:- The mood-changes of Davis come too quickly for my tastes. At first, he angrily talks with Justin and in the next moment, he is overwhelmed with sadness. Could have helped to add a few bridging words or even sentences in there.
He is first confuse, then he understand what Justin meant. Justin reminded him of his killing spree. xD
This place motivates me to become an artist, this place motivates me to learn coding, this place made me grow up, showed me the ways to interact with people. Unlike the old childish of me myself, I've learned a lot and gotten some experiences. For me, it's not just a fan forum, it's a helpful community. From a noob to someone who would think before he speaks, looking back at my old post made me laugh hard, I'm grateful of the differences between these 2 years.
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RE: Contest #21: Writing challenge - VOTING - by Hero destroyer - 07-04-2013, 05:21 AM



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