Add outlines to ear and also to clothes to point out folds.
Make his eyes smaller. These are to wide. Right eye occlude an eyebrow and left one stick out too much, there should some visble skin between outline and eye.
Eyebrows should be thicker (and above both eyes, right one is completely invisible). Check out original facepics and try to copy them.
I'd also increase contrast of skin, especially on neck, color there should be much darker.
Oh and make line of his lips thinner.
Nice job anyway, wait for this character fixed version.
Make his eyes smaller. These are to wide. Right eye occlude an eyebrow and left one stick out too much, there should some visble skin between outline and eye.
Eyebrows should be thicker (and above both eyes, right one is completely invisible). Check out original facepics and try to copy them.
I'd also increase contrast of skin, especially on neck, color there should be much darker.
Oh and make line of his lips thinner.
Nice job anyway, wait for this character fixed version.

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