08-03-2013, 07:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-03-2013, 09:13 PM by Bla bla bla 44.)
Tried fixing few things:
![[Image: 8gwu.png]](http://imageshack.us/a/img822/324/8gwu.png)
EDIT: V Those over his nose? They are supposed to be his muscles making that angry face. :P
![[Image: 8gwu.png]](http://imageshack.us/a/img822/324/8gwu.png)
RtXaS Wrote:That's actually pretty good. His face might be a little too low and the outlines are kinda too sketchy, but other than that it's really good.Yeah, i tend to do that. :P
The Hari Wrote:Add outlines to ear and also to clothes to point out folds.Check. However I didn't do much to his scarf.
The Hari Wrote:Make his eyes smaller. These are to wide. Right eye occlude an eyebrow and left one stick out too much, there should some visble skin between outline and eye.Tried making his left eye smaller and added eyebrow at the right one.
The Hari Wrote:Eyebrows should be thicker (and above both eyes, right one is completely invisible). Check out original facepics and try to copy them.Made them as thick as i can.
The Hari Wrote:I'd also increase contrast of skin, especially on neck, color there should be much darker.I added slightly darker colour on his neck that is hardly visible.
The Hari Wrote:Oh and make line of his lips thinner.Check.
EDIT: V Those over his nose? They are supposed to be his muscles making that angry face. :P
![[Image: double-jump-YinYin-base-1.gif]](http://i1245.photobucket.com/albums/gg586/Blablabla445/double-jump-YinYin-base-1.gif)
This is an inspiration from:
-YinYin's Character Development guide, to be more specific i took one of those bases.
-Urban Rivals' clan Skeelz, I took their uniform
I hope it's good. ^^
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