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Red Snow
#13
Before I even opened the thread after so much time to read the first chapter,I realized I was a little late.
I was like,"This thread must be FILLED with comments now."
But I must say,I'm surprised.Really guys.
Not ONE comment till now?
Guess I'll take the prestigious first comment title ;)

Zab,I've got to give it to you. I enjoyed the first chapter.
To tell you the truth,I made a cup of coffee just to read your first chapter :P (And what a delicious cup of coffee it is mmm..)
I haven't found any flaws yet. And I also enjoyed the potential small-scale brawl among them.
I also like how you named the team after birds. 'coz me LOVES birds :P

While I'm writing this,my coffee is now finished.(lol wut, that was quick D: ) So,I'll take this as a sign and go now ^^
I'm waiting for the next chapter. ;)
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Red Snow - by Zabobula - 07-27-2013, 05:19 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Gespenst - 07-27-2013, 07:32 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Zabobula - 07-27-2013, 08:50 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Gespenst - 07-27-2013, 08:55 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Dr. Time - 07-28-2013, 02:02 AM
RE: Red Snow - by Hero destroyer - 07-28-2013, 02:05 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Zabobula - 07-29-2013, 03:26 PM
RE: Red Snow - by LutiChris - 07-29-2013, 07:47 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Zabobula - 07-29-2013, 11:59 PM
RE: Red Snow - by LutiChris - 07-30-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: Red Snow - by Zabobula - 08-07-2013, 04:32 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Zabobula - 08-13-2013, 01:06 PM
RE: Red Snow - by Dr. Time - 08-16-2013, 03:30 PM



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