happy new year too ! well i hope you dont mind if i point out some flaws in this occasion..
1. the wrinkles in his fore head are quite wrong. there should be bent- horizontal line in the centre of the forehead sort of.
2. you should add wrinkles near the closed eye and make him smile more. add some elevation suggesting his smile in cheeks . i suggest you use some reference.
these are bit complicated to understand not because its difficult but my english is suckier
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good luck in developing your drawing skill in this upcoming new year !!
ps: i was thinkinh what i said previously will make the drawing even more semi realistic i.e more ugly . i think you could reduce the number of wrinkles in forehead which would hopefully solve the problem since this is anime type of drawing.
1. the wrinkles in his fore head are quite wrong. there should be bent- horizontal line in the centre of the forehead sort of.
2. you should add wrinkles near the closed eye and make him smile more. add some elevation suggesting his smile in cheeks . i suggest you use some reference.
these are bit complicated to understand not because its difficult but my english is suckier
. good luck in developing your drawing skill in this upcoming new year !!
ps: i was thinkinh what i said previously will make the drawing even more semi realistic i.e more ugly . i think you could reduce the number of wrinkles in forehead which would hopefully solve the problem since this is anime type of drawing.

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