Only thing you might don't like in your picture are clouds. It's hard to explain but they too perfectly follow each other. Like you have one main invisible curve line and you draw curvely (idk how to make adjective from curve) shaped clouds on it. "They have one direction of moving". (one direction, srsly Marko?)
That's not the way they look like
That shape would more fit into your last art "My Inside is Screaming" where everything is chaotic.
You probably missed lack of creativity to make various shapes. :P
Also in my opinion If you added darker tone of colors in the sky it would look better because it wouldn't be in "first place". Atm, Clouds are to expressive. You should reduce it. They screaming out and you can't not notice them. Background is rarely lighter then Main thing in this case girl and notes.
Everything else is superb. I love watching your progress and development.
That's not the way they look like
usually, they are randomly piled. (Click to View)
You probably missed lack of creativity to make various shapes. :P
Also in my opinion If you added darker tone of colors in the sky it would look better because it wouldn't be in "first place". Atm, Clouds are to expressive. You should reduce it. They screaming out and you can't not notice them. Background is rarely lighter then Main thing in this case girl and notes.
Everything else is superb. I love watching your progress and development.

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